MAH FAVORITE.

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"It's beautiful, the way it's meant to be, beautiful but it don't do shit for me, so peel away a little skin and choke upon the bone..."

Some part of me feels the need to reapply to poetryslamming.

But that part of me is retarded, so I ignore it. Regardless, these past five poems are so, even weeks after writing them, manage to not make me vomit continuously into the wide mouth of infinity.

Meanwhile, I love you so fucking much.

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we are!

(all teeth and gums.)

Of course these past five poems shouldn't make you vomit into the wide mouth of infinity because they are fucking beautiful. RECOGNIZE, SON. WORD.

I do agree that the part of you that wants to reapply to poetryslamming is retarded because WHY GOD WHY DO YOU SEEK ACCEPTANCE FROM THEM? HONESTLY, there is not one person in there that doesn't have a severe fucking christ complex that clouds their judgement entirely. If all of the great poets of the world somehow rose from the dead to apply at poetryslamming THEY would be told that their writing is horrible. So I think seeking acceptance from them is entirely futile and ridiculous.

Meanwhile, I think if YOU want to reapply you should.

I fucking love you so much.

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"It's beautiful, the way it's meant to be, beautiful but it don't do shit for me, so peel away a little skin and choke upon the bone..."

Wow.

<lifts chin off floor>

This must go to my favourites, and you to my watch list.

Sunday is beautiful and I refuse to advancely critique. (?)

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Literature Gallery Moderator

For Writers: Resource Central: Part One | Resource Central: Part Two

Ooh, it's amazing how neatly you told your story in so few lines, and I really think the image was a good choice.

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My life has been the poem I would have writ,
but I could not both live and utter it.
-Henry David Thoreau

The last part is pretty much amazing.

"a mere jangle" how unique. how originally powerful(or should i say weak). You are an inspiration to those who do not seek it. I plan to watch you simply from this poem.
I think its fantastic that you included "love." in this you explain "love"'s true meaning, simply fantastic.

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my gallery is better than your gallery: [link]

OMG simple and expressive. I love it!

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"Falsehood can hold out against much in this world, but not against art." -- Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn

LOOK AT MY BLOG, BITCH!!!!! [link]

I love this. It reminds me of my favorite poet's work. Which is a huge compliment, because he's amazing.

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Stand up for what you believe in, even if it means you're standing alone.